I love the pose and the details,this is a magnificent piece of work!

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thanks a lot

OHmuhGAWD this is great! awesome composition.

gotta love Heroes.

Thanks

if im correct hes from heroes
very good drawing

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Yeah, he is. Thanks!

np

Of the different pictures you had me look at, this one stands out the most. What the other four were lacking was shading variation, which this has.
You've done well with establishing core shadows and making sure everything doesn't just lump together in a Grey blob.
The only thing I can really recommend is to try and not have such a solid block of thick lining when doing a pencil only drawing. There is one part where that isn't an issue, and that would be the side of his left hand, it blends slightly into the coloration of the gun, and that gives it a good 'life like' appeal.

I hope this was of some help.

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Thanks for taking the time to give a critique. This will be very helpful in my future works. It's always refreshing to have other people look at my artworks and give recommendations on how to improve them. I do work hard to improve in every piece I make and comments such as this only makes my longing "to do better" stronger. Thank you very much.

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